kia ora bloggers george here. we have been carrying on with our volcano focus and heres one of the slides i have done. how would you have wrote it. What Point of view would you put it in.
Mālō e lelei George, thank you for sharing your writing with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "trees in a traumatised state". You can be proud of this work - well done George!
Malo e lelei George. Wow you have made some great word choices! These words help to make your writing more interesting and add detail too. As I was reading your writing I was able to create a vivid image of a volcanic eruption. I wonder what it would of looked like after the eruption?
My name is Moala and I attend St Pius X Catholic School in New Zealand. Your blog looks great I like how you've asked your viewers some questions. Maybe you could of told us what you did and tell us some things about volcanoes as your explanation. Overall it looks good Keep up the Good Work!
Hi George it is me Alfonsus and I go to St Pius x School and this blog omg so good I am so interested with all of this knowledge you have I wish I had the same but any ways keep up with the good work.
Hello George, My name is Audrey and I go tosaint puis x school I am also a year 6 they I go to class room 4 which is TWP 4. We are also learning about volcanoes but in a diffrent way. I like/love how you wrote your blog but next time could you write more and Maybe you could of told us what you did so have a great day and alway reach to the top
Mālō e lelei George, thank you for sharing your writing with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I particularly like: "trees in a traumatised state". You can be proud of this work - well done George!
ReplyDeleteMalo e lelei George. Wow you have made some great word choices! These words help to make your writing more interesting and add detail too. As I was reading your writing I was able to create a vivid image of a volcanic eruption. I wonder what it would of looked like after the eruption?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora George,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Moala and I attend St Pius X Catholic School in New Zealand. Your blog looks great I like how you've asked your viewers some questions. Maybe you could of told us what you did and tell us some things about volcanoes as your explanation. Overall it looks good Keep up the Good Work!
Hello George,
ReplyDeleteI really like your work because it looks like you put a lot of effort into telling your viewers about volcanoes. Keep Up The Great Work!
Hi George it is me Alfonsus and I go to St Pius x School and this blog omg so good I am so interested with all of this knowledge you have I wish I had the same but any ways keep up with the good work.
ReplyDeleteWOAH AMAZING! this looks amazing George, by the way I'm Lisiate, I really like this slide show of yours, it looks amazing, Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteHi George,l My name is Briana and I attend St Pius X Catholic School In New Zealnd. I really Like your blog about Volcanoes. Keep up the Great Work.
ReplyDeleteHello George,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Audrey and I go tosaint puis x school I am also a year 6 they I go to class room 4 which is TWP 4. We are also learning about volcanoes but in a diffrent way. I like/love how you wrote your blog but next time could you write more and Maybe you could of told us what you did so have a great day and alway reach to the top